Saturday, September 30, 2006

weekend!!!!!!!!!

I CANT BELIEVE ITS SATURDAY!!! It seems hard to believe and weird..but alas! It shall be over soon and there will be no more weekend just my geometry test staring at me from my school desk...Which isnt too...exiting..especially when you dwell on it..;)its sorta discouraging...While were on the note of being discouraging i've decided to start writing poetry idk how good it is so feedback would be awesome! I have this first one that i did on friday...


"Rain"
"The rain fell down quetly,
Who knew when it would end,
Slower and slower touching earth softly,
Slowly cleansing whatever it could mend,
Suddenly and beautifully the sun rose loftly,
Sending rays to all it would lend,
Until the day ended sweetly."

Then i have this awesomely depressing one that i havent titled yet..


"With pain and remorse I pen these words…
Love is not to be,
Because the difficulties in life,
Have become too extreme,
When did love not cover a multitude of problems?
Could it be that love does not yet exist,
For those “too young” to know what it truly is..?"

Im still working on editing that one because there are a few things i dont like about it that i need to change but yah ill probobly put the finalized version on here sometime in my span of life :D So anyways now to talk about life...I had a volleyball game last night against Masters Touch and coach played me!!!! I was sooo happy!! yah but i made a few mistakes but i will work on them and hoepfully they will go away. SADLY we lost...BUT we will hopefully win some by the end of this season. Our team just has too fight harder for VICTORY!!! Then today was nice and depressing because the weather was aweful and we were supposed to have a car wash for Banquet but it ended up not working out which is very sad...I think thats all today so hope you all have a awesome weekend! bye!

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

I love these poems!! You are very good at poetry. You were a poet and I didn't even know it...(=